Freedom can not freeze!
by @mahtowin
NSFWLiner Notes
This is more a fragment of a poem. It gos out to all those people in the Ukraine who suffer from an ice cold winter without heating, electricity and without hope for a a fast ending of this fucking war!
Free for a collab!
Lyrics
Freedom cannot freeze! We live in ice as frozen hopes carry our fear. But freedom cannot freeze!
We will stay. In our eyes there is no today but a tomorrow waits like an open window in the early day! Freedom cannot freeze!
Lyrics by Andrea Campanile
Comments
Thank you 🙏
Freedom cannot freeze is a powerful, emotive hook that brings so much imagery in such few words. I like how you don’t shy from the reality but keep a focus on hope - The ‘tomorrow waits like an open window’ hits hard
Thank you! 🙏
Wow! This is a powerful reflection on the realties facing Ukrainian soldiers! I hope they end the war sooner rather than later. It just stinks.
Hi Matt! It‘s not only for the soldiers but about all those people: children, old people, Mothers, etc. sitzing in the cold and dark flats and houses hopeing not to get bombed!
Hi Bear! Oh yes! It's all very bad. It's difficult to fathom and I hope it comes to a halt soon!
power driven rock EVH style ish I hear with keys and power chord distortion guitars, male vocal with drive. Would add on the second line this ... "We live in ice right here" scans better for the 4 lines.
Thanks! If you like to, go on and make a song out of it! Would be glad!
Well, I sure hope this finds some music, as it is succinct and powerful. Could also apply to the situation in Minneapolis here in the US. I was compelled to pick up my guitar and work up a simple guitar/vocal folk protest version of your words - I'll record it if that interests you.
Yes, please do! And thanks for your words! You can also develop a longer text with including the situation in Mineapolis.
I love the images in those lyrics. Especially the line "frozen hopes carry out fear" i find it very powerful.