14 And Done

by @wsharper69

There is no demo for this song.

Liner Notes

Lyrics

14 and done oh will you be one Music's in the air Lyrics written everywhere Back of my hand Wishing I had a band Restaurant napkin,  Makes my head spin Never wanting to repeat the days gone bye  A 40 hour week My wife 2 kids a dog and a cat A mother who needs my help Where will I get the time at 1,2 ,3 it's not easy can't you see Feeling like a circus juggler 4,5 6 like a drummer without sticks So many more in between  14 and done oh will you be one 28 days oh so many ways 14 and done oh will you be one Hoping praying you'll get it done Making time make it rhyme  Will it be sublime 14 and done oh will you be the one Or will it make you come undone.

Comments

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Didn't know about the two kids and a dog But hoping 14 comes again this year!

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😉 kids and dogs always add a twist

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OK, as I said on the Tropes You Hate thread, IMO, everyone gets ONE pass to write a song about songwriting :-) Hope you find the time in a life that sounds like all of ours, very relatable.

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I am guilty of this more than once I did one last year also 😄

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Oh brother, been there! what a great read and true to the bone. a day in the life.."Lyrics written everywhere Back of my hand Wishing I had a band" welcome to my world and well. probably most everyone here! Great cadence. I can hear some cool beats to spoken word!

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Thanks

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I like the bounce and internal rhythm to this lyric. Good flow to it!

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Yes! What a celebration of the FAWM experience. I appreciated the specific bits of commitments to daily living but there's still that drive to create. Bravo!

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It sounds like you've got your hands full but as the saying goes, "If you want something doing ask a busy person"... So I'm sure you can conjure up the necessary with a bit of prodigious juggling...good luck!

[FAWM]