FAWM: "The Only New I Need"

The Only New I Need

2 days ago by @kc_

Skirmish: The Joy of the New (@ajna1960)

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Liner Notes

#needsmusic #needscollab #skirmish #imbolc Great Skirmish - was approx. 20-minute write. Like the chorus that arrived the bridge is kind of funny the "deer - doe - bucks" Always reminds me of the 3 stooges bit - LMAO! Thanks for the prompt!

Lyrics

The Only New I Need

VI I heard of this Through passers by Seen In my dreams My minds eye

Folks have told me so Round the fire Swore things exist Of no owners prior

C But the only new that I need Is the following sun On the moon’s recede Even clouded and gray Will send me away to Heaven To Heaven and embrace another shot at life

V II Marley was chained Swore on the stand To the coin refrain No second hands

Solo?

Bridge? And the burning bucks, In the pouch The doe you grow, Dying to get out And release with joy, pray for all it sates And anticipation just evaporates Head hung heavy on the window sill With the brand new bling and can't pay the bills

C But the only new that I need Is the following sun On the moon’s recede Even clouded and gray Will send me away to Heaven, To Heaven And embrace another shot at life

Comments

@rahma_the_bass 19h

Huge fan of the chorus, reminds me of a classic movie, where the heroine talks of living her life and the land she’s living on. Great visual devices.

@willow1 1d

Does second hands refer to time? A mysterious journey! Very moody and descriptive setting.

@seemanski 1d

Cool take, I like the imagery here and the message it sends, don't sweat what you think you want, it's about appreciating what you have. Now I'm off to amazon to find some more stuff! 😆

@robinleaf 1d

I really enjoyed the wordplay here and the sentiment is really beautiful. Great write!

@nahlej381 1d

Very well done and agree with John, the word economy is commendable!

@coolparadisoMod 2d

Nice lyric mate - I think thats a bridge! good economical word usage! nice one

@newukenewyork 2d

Cool write! Music started coming to me a little on the bridge — feels strong and rhythmic there, I think. I like how your syntax feels “olden” and new at the same time — a good mix.