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This song is for the #CommentsFirst challenge: https://fawm.org/forums/3649 It doesn't exist yet. It will be written based on the first few comments it receives. Please leave a comment below!
My only constraint: it should fit with my FAWM album #anewcolor, basically that means I’m talking about capitalism and corruption and all that jazz baby.
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I love how you stuck with that extended metaphor. I've never thought about restaurants quite that way before.
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What a cool choice to go with that homemade percussion sound set. It sounded like a trash can lid for the bass drum, and was that just forks on your table to create the "sticks" effect? I think I'm hearing the commentary that the endless bloodlust and quest for material goods has left the creatives - those of us who actually LIVE - without anything to actually make vibrant art except for the bare essentials of survival.
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I love how you channeled your anger into this song, taking the expression to its extremes!