Saturday Night Fever

by @hmstreetteam

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Saturday Night Fever
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Liner Notes

#countryrock #skirmish #weekend Yes, I am a big Bee Gees fan, but that is not the point of this song.

Lyrics

I’ve got a feeling I should have had A better plan I can’t do All these things The way I am A weekend Seems forever On a Friday night But you’ve got to listen When something Doesn’t feel right

Saturday night fever Sunday morning cough Taking Monday off

Here’s my chance I know that’s What you say It’s true that Every dog Will have its day And you have earned Your moment In the sun But there’s no Guarantee You’ll get things done

Saturday night fever Sunday morning cough Taking Monday off

Where did I catch that fever It must have been at the docks And then I was the boat That landed in the rocks Did I do too much shopping On my credit card Why does life always Have to be so hard

Saturday night fever Sunday morning cough Saturday night fever Sunday morning cough Ah ha Saturday night fever Sunday morning cough Taking Monday off

Comments

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I like the honest and relatable story here. I have had a cough and my credit card has seen better days. 😀 Nice skirmish work and song construction.

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Fine introspective lyric. I love the chorus. Been there, done that! Nice work.

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I like how you took a movie title and made it your own with a totally different vide and story.

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@thob

Love the vibe of this, I have been there, brother! Great chorus!

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I love the chorus. Great work!

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"Takin' Monday off" I like it!!!

Personally, I would've taken the tempo up a bit, given it a bit more of a rock drive. And changed the guitar strum pattern between chorus and verse, make that change more clear. But a good write!!!

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The tone and delivery of the song fits the lyrics so well. Very fitting direction to go with that title. Love the last three lines of the chorus.

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Nice twist on the title! I suspect I won't see the movie in quite the same way next time I see it! Nice work for a skirmish too. Hope you have a very restful fever-free recovery Monday! 😉🎸

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Sounds like a lot of angst is being conveyed here. Strong and simple guitar work. I like it. Good work for a quick skirmish.

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