Breakthrough
by @casijohnson
Skirmish: Breakthrough (@robinleaf)Liner Notes
Lyrics
Breakthrough [Verse 1] Your blue eyes pull me in, I need to look away Getting courage, for what I have to say Words are choking me, they’re so overdue Our love’s like fire, but I’m leaving you [Verse 2] Sleeping in rock bottom, it’s time I open my eyes You wore so many red flags, I missed the disguise I know I’ve said it before, but came back for more I now see the light, it’s guiding me out the door [Pre Chorus] I loved the rush, I hated the crash I saw the light, choosing peace over whiplash My mind is racing, time to come to I see the light, it’s my Breakthrough [Chorus] Yeah…Breakthrough My mind came to Breakthrough Even if I love you Breakthrough It’s time I flew Breakthrough It’s overdue Breakthrough Need something new Breakthrough My heart breaks in two Yeah…my heart breaks in two [Chorus] Yeah…Breakthrough My mind came to Breakthrough Even if I love you Breakthrough It’s time I flew Breakthrough It’s overdue Breakthrough Need something new Breakthrough My heart breaks in two Yeah…my heart breaks in two [Verse 3] I can’t love you, though you live in my soul Push you away, taking back my control Turn my back, my strength on cue My life is mine, I’m having a Breakthrough [Chorus] Yeah…Breakthrough My mind came to Breakthrough Even if I love you Breakthrough It’s time I flew Breakthrough It’s overdue Breakthrough Need something new Breakthrough My heart breaks in two Yeah…my heart breaks in two [Chorus] Yeah…Breakthrough My mind came to Breakthrough Even if I love you Breakthrough It’s time I flew Breakthrough It’s overdue Breakthrough Need something new Breakthrough My heart breaks in two Yeah…my heart breaks in two Holding it together…it’s my Breakthrough…
Comments
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I thank you for taking the time to review my song! I love the feedback and take it to heart. :)
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This is FANTASTIC. Is there going to be music? Do you need some? 😅 The first half of verse 2 is absolutely my favorite. Amazing lines. Hot damn. Scorching.
Thank you for putting that Skirmish out there! I love participating in those challenges. If you would like to use the lyrics to generate some music with them, I would be excited to see the collaboration. I am someone that can put words together for songs, but I would not classify myself as a musician. I use an AI tool to hear my words to music. I am learning a lot doing that. However, there is nothing better than a human artist putting their spin with music and bringing together the words...it always feels like magic to me! Thank you for the feedback!!
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Nice flow and punch to the lyric. Let me know if music happens!
I will definitely let you know if an artist from FAWM puts some music behind these lyrics. I write all the lyrics myself...but, need a musician to help build the song musically. I do use an AI tool for vocals/music after I write the lyrics. It's helped me a lot with being so new to all of this. I very much appreciate the feedback!!
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I love this one! Your songs are so poignantly relatable to me. ♥️