Laura Asking What

by @soapstone

Liner Notes

hello fawm! last year i didnt manage much but this year i can feel the Songwriter's Spirit inside of me and ive got a good feeling about things. a lot of my songs are kind of rigidly defined in terms of chord structure and melody but with this one i just sort of kept going lol without repeating things much. i think it came out nice! #rock #guitar

Lyrics

Smebdy hlp me Mnster wll eat m Dn't look bhind me Mnster insde me Montain erpting Zeeky boogy doog

All out of time Don't know your lines Pouring your wine Stop your sighing Don't act surprised Don't dry your eyes The film will look fine With you crying

And the baby dies And the angel dies But the king wont cry He's a man now He's a man now!

Laura asking what!

Please help yourself Please help yourself Please help yourself When you come in

What do you mean What have you been saying Where have I been going

Where has baby gone Why is world so wrong Max McCabe on Christmas day I'm crying crying dying crying lying crying trying crying and! Even though I love my wife she tells me to stay out of sight

Comments

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Oh lord this is super cool! I love that glitchy thing! Wow I am really impressed with the whole thing—lyrics, music, structure, originality….very well done!

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I hit the random button and came across your song. Super unique. Love the shortened words and Devo like vocal sound you start out with. Wasn't expecting the change in vocal style that came later, but the contrast is nice. I love what you did here in less than 2 minutes.

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@mccannrs

Love the stream of consciousness type lyrics, and you had so many fun sounds throughout, like the mountain eruption lol, and 8 bit sounding synths. Just a fun, zany rocker.

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Long have I awaited the return of Junie Daydream! This is a quality start that reminds me a bit of Talking Heads meets Good Morning, Good Morning by the Beatles

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aww :') thank you so much!!

[FAWM]