I don't know what kind of production feedback you are looking for, but I loved it the way the lofi sounding guitar leads to clarity in vocal and other instruments, building to other voices and clean guitar. I think this is a well-crafted production that really has a nice slow build to a powerful conclusion at around 2:20 going back to the beginning and then building faster again to an even more textured climax with screaming vocals into quiet. Nice work!

I like the gentle laid back nature of the track. Just a gentle 'clack' from a drum rimshot adding percussion every now and then to drive the song again. I like how everything stops now and then. That said, you could totally transform the track with some driving guitars or, as someone else said, some strings. Great vocals too. 😎

What time signature would you say this is in? My brain is too focused on the music so I may need to come back later to even comment on lyrics but everything feels so singable and you KNOW I love yummy dynamics 💖 love your octaves too. This is awesome

I agree, this sounds great in the current version. I love your voice.

I think this is pretty polished. I think a rush of strings before verse two could add a lot, but very well done. I enjoyed this a lot.