I Made You Something

by @lsorese

I Made You Something
lsorese
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Liner Notes

A song about stealing your friends' best lines for your art.

Lyrics

I wrote a song while we were on the phone You said so much, so I was taking notes I stole your words and tried make them rhyme. I drifted off but I stayed on the line

I tried to write down the words, so I wouldn’t forget. And I closed my eyes and daydreamed again. Half of me is with you, half is somewhere else. I drift away, I can’t help myself.

You said my name and I came back too late. My thoughts were deep into something I can’t name. You opened up and I kept drifting on. The bridge is where it changes, but I couldn't bring you along

I tried to write down the words, so I wouldn’t forget. And I closed my eyes and I fell through again. Some of me is with you, mostly somewhere else. I don't know where I go, I can't help myself.

Somewhere in the water, somewhere in the steam. The space between awake, and the edges of a dream. Here inside the hum of your voice and mine. The space between the notes, the weight of borrowed time.

I made it back and you knew I was gone. And somehow, graciously, you still held on. Now some of me is with you, more than before. okay, I'm here now, sorry, I’m listening. I'm all yours

Comments

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I know you said you were focusing on production, so I'll say that that vocal sounds so good, dude!

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Well singed! Lovely setting. Really some good stuff here. Very evocative, connective, honest, it's pretty without being smarmy. I like it. Real nice work

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this somehow already seems like a classic? wow. it feels like i'm on the phone with you all

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This is a lovely melody and an experience I'm sure a lot of us here can relate to

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I'm so here for this, it feels like a midwest emo lullaby. Well done, my dude!

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There’s some theater kid energy here that I’m not mad about. But f’real - you can pack the words in with the best of em and it just feels correct. Real purdy.

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excellent vocals and presentation

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@nomade

great stuff man

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@gavelpro

Wow. Such light and delicate thievery.

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@tiasanna

Nice singing. It provides a very immediate perspective.

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@rvaross

Such a clear and effective approach, great voice and melody. Love the concept!

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