Folding In on Myself

by @charlie_leemburg

Skirmish: Contradiction (@robinleaf)
There is no demo for this song.

Liner Notes

Contradictions are my game Ever think about how some fawmers struggle to make it to the goal and others just pump out songs disregarding the goal.

Lyrics

I wake up from my bed Hit my head, hit my head I look up at the floor I want more, I want more Yesterday I turned 12 baby I was once 24... months old

How do you write something That contradicts something? I know what the secret is

Just look at politicians Just look at the corporation They can never make up their minds They can never make up their minds They say they’re genuine And then they lie

I wake up from my bed Hit my head, hit my head I look up at the floor I want more, I want more And I love all the politicians in the world I don’t think money can corrupt Not anymore

I remember thinking that I couldn’t think no more But then I escaped the factory through the back door And then I recognized the truth is That I never, ever slept That I never had any bed And that I had never said anything I shouldn’t ever say Cause I’ve got no secrets anyway

Comments

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Great take on the prompt! I really really love this repeated section:

I wake up from my bed Hit my head, hit my head I look up at the floor I want more, I want more

Super relatable themes you've brought up. Love the word play.

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“I want more I want more” hooked me in — I can relate!! Really interesting lyrics just starting to unfold in me. Well written!

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There's a lot to think about in these lyrics, and I think the repetition works well. Nice take on the prompt

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