What a beautifull and poetic picture are you drawing here?! This poem is so delicate! The words float on the guitar like a blossom on a river!

Plaintive longing for companionship denied. Can relate. "Druthers" is one of those words that really deserves to get used more often. The way this gently washes in and out is wonderfully soothing. That mix is deceptive: it sounds simple, but there's a lot going on...

Lovely...makes me wish I had some headphones handy. How the heck did you make the gorgeous sounds that soar above the arpeggios? It's all quite magical

I agree with Bill. Nice word flow. Escaping to the skies sounds quite appealing…

gracefully/tastefully that is what writing near rhymes is all about. the poem is altogether perfect. and the musical break intensifies the picture.