World With Lots of Room

by @mishykatz

Skirmish: The Joy of the New (@ajna1960)
World With Lots of Room
mishykatz
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Liner Notes

#firstfruits #skirmish #imbolc #girlwithpiano

I used the skirmish as a prompt, it may have taken a bit more than an hour to write but not much. I had this idea for the piano so I took it a bit further! Weeeee my first!

Lyrics

F# The first page is empty E Waiting to be filled B Wild anticipation F# To see what we will build

C#m Sometimes its dark C#m Sometimes its scary D#m Sometimes we hurt D#m Sometimes we just want to let go

B Together we can win F# Together we can heal E Let go of what has been F# Plant a fertile field B Lets grow something new F# Fragile tender bloom E Sunshine overdue for this F# B World with lots of room

F# I’m holding up the light E I hope that you can see B We have to work together F# When we disagree

C#m Sometimes its dark C#m Sometimes its scary D#m Sometimes we hurt D#m Sometimes we just want to let go

B Together we can win F# Together we can heal E Let go of what has been F# Plant a fertile field B Lets grow something new F# Fragile tender bloom E Sunshine overdue for this F# B World with lots of room

B We can win D#m We can heal E F# Lets grow something new

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This feels like a lullaby of hope, beautiful. Love the shifts in key (I think?) and the echoing of the melody in the piano piece. Nicely done!

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thank you!!

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Beautiful melody! Love the descending call and response motif. The song feels very expansive and bucolic with such a sparse arrangement.

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thank you!!!

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So hopeful! Lots of images I love, but particularly the idea of sunshine being overdue resonates with me. We've had a stormy, overcast winter and the last three days of sun have been soaked up gratefully. I really like the descending motif as well, offsetting the leaps in the vocals.

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thank you and so good to see you !!

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What a beautiful, gentle melody - perfect for these lyrics!

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thank you !!!

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I wanted to write more but I'm on call teaching English on an app right now and somebody called me right when I was trying to finish this comment. The piano fits so perfectly and I love how it mirrors the vocal melody. Just a really beautiful synergy and I love how simple it is. I wouldn't want anything added it's so... I know I said the word already but gentle. Just so gentle in the way that it is instilling some hope.

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