Lilly
by @richaaaay
Lyrics
January twenty-five Just a week ago Lilly was alive A gentle soul, always aglow but her time had arrived
Just 23 Pretty as can be
With kindness and grace Abundance of faith A shining light A warrior’s fight With armor of prayer Her sword in the air Battle scarred From being poisoned is hard Bravely she faced…the odds
Was the battle lost Or was it a draw There was mutual cost She loved New Orleans and Mardi Gras She celebrated life and explored
Just 23 Pretty as can be
With kindness and grace Abundance of faith A shining light A warrior’s fight With Armor of prayer Her sword in the air Battle scarred From being poisoned is hard Bravely she faced…the odds
Comments
Oh how I love your harmonic sensibilities and guitar playing... sigh.. This is a sweet tribute to someone special, with dancing lyrics. So lovely to hear you again!
Lovely guitar and heartfelt story telling. I really enjoyed the almst spoken word set to the harmony of guitar which communicates the song so well.
Great to see you! This is so sad and poignant. It’s got a gentleness in the music that honors the words and her life. Lovely.
Not sure what the story behind this is, but...Oh. My. Goodness!!! What a heartfelt and lovely song. Keep 'em coming! ❤️
Wow when you pause at the odds it was so emotional. Gorgeous and poignant.
This is so sad.... but beautifully presented, so intimate and spare, direct and true.
Beautiful and heroic. For anyone who has witnessed this - your lyrics really capture the whole of it all - the complicated interplay of fierce fighting and living life. Gorgeous finger picking and love hearing your vocals. More!
What a beauty - it feels relaxed and tightly wound at the same time. There's a playful conversationality to the guitarwork, a playfulness, which works wonderfully with the sincerity of the words. Absolutely excellent stuff.
absolutely beautiful. stirring and triumphant and sad. wow.
Wow, this is really beautiful. Somewhere between a celebration and a eulogy, you handled the topic delicately and with dignity.
Anything I could say seems so inadequate. You deliver a heart-breaking story with beauty and grace.
This is so gentle and heartfelt. I love the sound of your voice Rich. You always mesmerize me with your tunes.
Great to have you back! Not much to add to the comments below: beautiful guitar, and your vocal is really characterful.
Beautiful and tender, Rich. It sounds raw and honest and I always love that from your work. Perfectly delivered, and it's always a joy to hear how you play your guitar. Your chord choices and pacing are second to none!
so delicate and respectful..i can hear it being sung at the wake, so much more suitable than a serman. i love the way you play the guitar and the sincerity in your vocie.
this is very touching and beautiful. love that line ‘was the battle lost or was it a draw’.. i’ve always hated that phrase ‘lost their battle’, so a lovely spin. Thank you for sharing
Heartbreaking tribute with some really strong images. Your voice sounds sincerely affected. Sad and beautiful.
A tragic song for a beautiful person. You know where to do the pauses
This is a special little tune dude. Beautiful tribute. Love the dry, simplicity of the recording, it really feels like I’m right there with you. As others have said, that gentle lilting 3/4 is strangely hypnotic and uplifting. I especially enjoy the guitar run behind the words “With kindness and grace / Abundance of faith”. Well done.
This is beautiful. The fingerpicking in 3/4 gives it such a natural flow, and the melancholy in the lyrics feels deeply poignant without ever tipping into sentimentality. There’s a real warmth in the performance that carries the emotion with a lot of grace.
Richaaaay.... What you have here is heartbreakingly beautiful. I love the almost celebratory and joyous guitar playing that elevates the sad reality of loss to a noble place and reflects this persons bravery and love of life. All of this perfectly delivered by your vocals, both sung and spoken. Just beautiful!
sublime melancholy - love the guitar work
Beautifully tragic lyrics, absolutely gorgeous! I love the guitar picking, and the way you sing radiates such deep emotion.
Thanks FroggyMagee...I sing like a frog...Maybe we should swap names...😜...Only kidding. You fit your name perfectly, although you definitely don't sing like a frog...
beautiful Rich! So resonant for too many people, heartbreaking and stark but with a warmth brought to it and as always beautiful guitar part
Love that comment...Thanks Wobbie.
Rich, this is heartbreaking and beautiful. You are channeling so much emotion here from so many others.
Heavy indeed. I'm happy that you're able to release what is on your heart. I do offer condolences to all affected by her passing.
Music is such a great outlet for sadness and sorrow...this is so well done. Sorry for your loss.
Same reply...It's not a personal loss but a loss all the same. It impacted me.
Love the guitar passages. Your vocal adds a rich atmosphere. Sad subject, lovely song.
Thanks Roger...Looking forward to hearing what you post...
Damn dude. This broke my heart. Sending love your way. I’m glad I got to hear you play and sing but I’m sorry for your loss. Never hesitate to reach out. Love and respect
It's not a personal loss but a loss all the same. It impacted me.
Well it shattered my heart still AND you can still reach out anytime and we can talk about cool stuff instead of sad stuff 🤷🏻♂️ you shouldn’t be so good at your craft I suppose
Yes...Let's talk about some cool stuff. Not looking to delve into sad stuff. Exciting to listen to your posts. Trying to free up some time for listening...
very poignant
The simplicity of the guitar part here is so beautiful and poignant. I love the short lines and how you've packed so much story into a lyric that looks simple but is far from it. I loved "Was the battle lost/Or was it a draw" and how the song is focused on Lilly's strength rather than her sickness.