to be of use
Liner Notes
i have a very snot-heavy cold. 😞 my voice leaves much to be desired. i fear the chorus needs some polishing/fine tuning but you know what it’s a first draft and it’s done. ;-; i might try and record a better demo later this month once i sound a little more human. or maybe i won’t ¯|(ツ)/¯
baby’s first DADGAD, which might be obvious because the chords i went for are probably the first chords that everyone fking around in dadgad goes for. also, i genuinely can’t tell when my writing is too oblique or too obvious. help a gal out whose brain isn’t firing on all cylinders? 🥺
from what sense i can make of my own song (inner world a phantom limb indeed 💀), i think i wrote an instruction manual on what not to do? a cautionary tale against taking "love and be loved" to the extreme? verily what you see before your eyes is the unfiltered inner monologue of a traumatized enneagram 2. 🤪 if that’s also you, i’m raising my glass
#folk #singersongwriter #alternatetuning #acousticonetake #girlwithguitar #guitar #acoustic
Lyrics
tune your senses to the tapping pen, the bouncing leg, ‘til your inner world’s a phantom limb you need to shed
don’t fight against the waves that push you down just take a knee never let them see how hard it is to drown or how easy
to be of use just broker truces and slip beneath the skin of those around not like a knife but like the sense of life that wraps you in its arms, safe and sound
train your words to get an earnest laugh, a sunny smile if being loved becomes your epitaph, go extra miles
don’t fight against the way it makes you feel when you can see all the fun ways you contort just to reveal who you can be
to be of use just broker truces and slip beneath the skin of those around not like a knife but like the sense of life that wraps you in its arms, safe and sound that wraps you in its arms, safe and sound oh, let me wrap you in my arms, safe and sound
Comments
I've made one DADGAD song, and I think these chords are a lot more creative than the ones I did!
I mean I think you sound great here for what it’s worth. I love that idea of the world being a phantom limb. And the dissonant chord on “take a knee” is SO GOOD. This is so beautiful.
So, the fawn response in inventive poetic metaphors? Oh, I don't recognize that at all. 🙃 Oof. "If being loved becomes your epitaph" is a gut punch, honestly. And I know absolutely nothing about the mysteries of DADGAD, but this just sounded like a well-crafted Lauren song to me, not a beginner anything. I wish you less gunk, but it wasn't detectable here, FWIW. 💙
Oh I think I can relate to these lyrics very well. Welcome to the wonderful world of DADGAD.. it's fun here! I love how contemplative, raw and heartfelt this song sounds. You have created a beautiful atmosphere. Thank you for sharing.
Gorgeous words. Really love the plucked chords in the chorus. I too, slip beneath the skin of those around. The second verse got me in particular. I feel this deeply.
Yeah. A hauntingly beautiful tune with your trademark quirky metaphors ("your inner world's a phantom limb") and deceptively simple yet intricate structure -- i mean, this does not sound like a first foray into DADGAD.
Gorgeous melody and vibe. I was holding my breath and floating a bit over the phrases. Thanks for posting it.